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2009-08-12 11:08 pm (UTC)
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Here's a phrase that knocked me right out of a book (on p. 4):
"Wildness surrounded him, oozing out of his pores like the sweet musk that covered his body. The man was magnificent in his rugged beauty."
Even for a romance, I'm outta there.
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"Wildness surrounded him, oozing out of his pores like the sweet musk that covered his body. The man was magnificent in his rugged beauty."
Even for a romance, I'm outta there.