I can't figure out that weird interface for comments, but I think in Chris Weuve's case, instead of thinking of it as 'newbie asks pro' which seems to have a power imbalance dynamic built into it, that it might be more worthwhile to think of it as a workshopping experience. After all, he has considerable other skills to bring to the table. So he's not got the fiction skillset yet--this is no different than a writer who has minimal skills in areas that Chris is expert coming to him for advice.