ext_135698 ([identity profile] deborahjross.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] deborahjross 2009-10-21 10:08 pm (UTC)

I love your responsiveness to the needs of your WIP. I think that's exactly right for this kind of choice -- the story dictates it, demands this element of voice and tone.

Any ideas on why this story works in present but not in past tense?

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting